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Chapter 24 - The First Letter

Marjorie wrote Ione from custody.

Dr. Anita reviewed.

First paragraph:

I am sorry things became so frightening.

Too passive.

Not delivered.

Second draft later:

Ione,

I made you scrub floors as punishment.

I made you sleep beside the laundry room.

I told you your dad needed space from you.

Those things were wrong.

Good.

Then:

Your dad did not ask me to send you to England.

Good.

I changed papers so it looked like he had.

Very good.

Then:

Aunt Eleanor did not know I was lying.

Good.

Then:

You were never being sent away because you were bad.

Excellent.

Ione listened.

Asked:

“Grandma wanted?”

“Yes.”

“Dad no?”

“No.”

“Grandpa no?”

“He did not know.”

Then:

“Can I be mad?”

“Yes.”

She nodded.

“I am.”

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Good.

No forgiveness assignment.

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